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发表于 2014-5-12 19:53:45
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出句:平仄仄平平仄仄
对句:平仄平平仄仄仄?想对句先学习一下相关知识和规则吧
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发表于 2014-5-13 03:59:48
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望舒容对河汉钓?欠工整哦
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发表于 2014-5-13 11:10:02
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“新月”、“望舒”同指月亮,是否合掌?
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发表于 2014-5-13 19:07:06
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