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谢谢苏夏,点评到位。拟改为“鸟依绿柳眠”可否?请教。
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发表于 2013-7-14 20:55:52
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用“雁欲云庭憩”似乎更好,个见。O(∩_∩)O~~
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发表于 2013-7-14 23:09:02
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发表于 2013-7-15 09:31:18
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