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出句:一曲高山流水,谁解其中语 |
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发表于 2013-10-25 08:43:56
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虽“汉宫秋月”也是十大名曲之一,然拼凑嫌疑过重,对句不应在坑,而应多重意;问好联友!!
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发表于 2013-10-25 20:16:52
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