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出句:放歌陌上空相守 |
发表于 2014-9-4 14:15:15
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联句流畅,联意很好。但不符合联律。出句为平平仄仄平平仄,则对句应为仄仄平平仄仄平,135不论。问好新朋友。
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发表于 2014-9-5 02:10:08
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