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出句:惊雷发起无声处 |
发表于 2019-4-23 22:05:26
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‘猛虎低威落寞时’更好!
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发表于 2019-4-24 08:23:28
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哦,乍一看难理解‘蓄威’如是蓄势就好理解了。或可:猛虎蓄威寂静时。更好?个见共勉!
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