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恋恋对句平仄工整,意境优美!
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童心老师之对仗工稳,联意畅达!赞
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对句不错,惜花对播,开春对灌水,种别开生面
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虽是嵌入秋香免了孤平,失替却得不偿失,无情不成立,呵呵
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7哥好句,嵌梦得公不着痕迹,巨才洪识,赐田养士,冯逢谐音,句意通顺!赞
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意好,绿tea
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