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发表于 2014-4-1 23:43:44
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发表于 2014-4-2 00:25:28
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发表于 2014-4-2 10:13:00
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“起”字仄了,此处应为平声哦
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发表于 2014-4-2 11:07:45
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“文”字平了,换个仄声字就好看了
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